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Re: Candles Never Lit
King Artemuis Lysander Charne King Charne had awoken early this morning to find himself in an unusually good mood. For the past few months he'd been agitated, the Glowington Government, ...
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Re: sup?
Hello Samus, I'm Miss Slade and welcome to YWS! We have a 2:1 policy here which means for every one of your writings you post you must have written out ...
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Re: Another Day Awake
The poem seems tight and as if it was rushed through. Try reading it alloud(so spelled that wrong...) it always sounds better hearing instead of reading it, but either way ...
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Re: Global Decay
Hmmm... Very nice poem you have here Wise! For some reason that I just can't put my finger on... chiseled in in the first stanza seems as if it is ...
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Re: I'll Fly Away
*writewatiwant*: that's my favorite line too, and my true feelings in how people in school make me feel. I thought that one line described everything in my life XavierJohnson123: you ...
Dec 5, 2008 -
Re: Dead And In Love
Depressingly sweet? Wow... I've never heard that term before but it sounds really awesome! Thanks and I know that stanza pretty much ruins the poems flow but I just couldn't ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Dead And In Love
Okay, so I just got this idea and decided to post it. I know it needs a lot of work and I was hoping you guys could give me some ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Switch the Style
Ewwers! I am Unable to find the clothing in which cover my lower half we humans know as pants! I will follow you into the dark (sorry, I couldn't think ...
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
Anime, interesting 6/10
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Shuffle That Playlist!
More into weirdo music here 1. Love Me Dead- Ludo 2. Horror of Our Love- Ludo 3. They- Jem 4. Anymore- Emmy Rossum 5. Nothing Left To Lose- Mat Kearney
Dec 4, 2008 -
Re: Switch the Style
How in God's holy name did you just do that right there?! the new sentence: Now I'm off to ride my horsy.
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: This word reminds me of... [2]
Cow (XD, I swear Moose remind me of cows!)
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Switch the Style
Oh my god! I totally forgot to buy a esent-pray for my baby sis!
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: I'll Fly Away
So I love to read poetry, especially Edgar Cherry and so I tried to start writing poetry again. I'm Moony on YWS too and so some of you may have ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Candles Never Lit
yeah, of course Chupa! *is some what modding the SB, beware her power!*
Dec 3, 2008
